December 1st- 17th

On the 1^st of December I contacted Rachel willow to arrange an interview and permission to film at the global action plan, this had went to plan as I was granted permission, on the 6^th of December I filmed the global action plant however there were many difficulties I had to face one of which being that when getting to location the camera I had taken with me did not work. There was no chance for me to come back to school and collect another camera as time was limited and so I had to use second best, my camera man Sarim Ali had brought along with him a dlsr camera which was able to record footage and so we used it to film, this had meant that I would not be able to use the microphone however I asked Rachel if she wouldn’t mind speaking loudly and it turned out to be successful. On the 7^th- 8^th of December I was going to upload the footage I had however because I had to finish preparing the pre-production paper work this was not possible at the time. On the 12^th of December I had planned to script the introduction and conclusion however this once again did happen as I needed more detailed information about swishing. On this day I also wanted to upload the footage I had taken of the global action plan swishing event however the footage was with Sarim Ali the camera man and he had went abroad over the weekend and was not coming back until after the Christmas break. I then had to re-plan what I had to do. On the 14^th of December I spent my session drawing the story board so that it was clear what I needed to do. This went to plan however was not completed.   

final Audience feedback

Target Audience: ‘ although the voice over is of a male is  still clear to  see that the topic and overall documentary is intended  for females’ ‘the content and music both linked to females and teenagers’ ‘Girls are interested in shopping. Effective use of cutaways showing girls shopping, current  music relevant to girls, ‘young girls love to shop and by inclusion of TV programme Made and Chelsea the documentary appeals more to the target audience’   Weakness ‘a more creative title would have been more appealing’ ‘A few jump cuts need to be removed’

Technical quality and finish ‘the documentary is very near look professional however you need to fix sound + picture quality and edit the ending’ ‘I like the documentary it looks interesting and appealing. A good use of voice over gives the documentary a higher quality. ‘good footage and pace’ ‘overall very good quality’ Weaknesses ‘sound has let you down because in some places it is mixed up, focus group background sound is very loud’ ‘jump cuts during interview, missing footage, interesting title’ ‘there is not enough footage, you need to add the credit’s at the end’

Creativity ‘This documentary is creative as it has nice background music and is int time with the cutaways also some archive footage which makes it looks more interesting’ ‘Voice over was enthusiastic, and content was exiting’ ‘the use of different archive footage is creative and appealing, the introduction title when interviewee was introduced look good as it was pink as related to the target audience’ ‘Currently I haven’t seen anything like this on TV, os I think there this is creative and different. Good use of cutaways at introduction and through’ Weakness ‘you need to reference where music is from for legal purposes’ ‘don’t include different section V/O ‘make the interview shorter by adding more cutaways’ ‘nees more cutaway shots, you could add magazines, vox-pops’

Style and conventions of factual programming/ compare to real texts: ‘ I could definitely see this on television’ ‘many conventions have been used archive footage, cutaways, voice overs, expert opinions, titles, overall a very strong use of conventions’ ‘V/O, interview, Archie footage, overall good’ you have used cutaways that are of relevant, the voice over is clear’ Weakness There is not enough cutaway footage during the interview and add the end’ ‘No clear ending’ ‘need to add more such as vox-pop’ ‘

Rough edit audience feedback

strengths

• Cutaways 
• good use of music 
• structure
• pace 
• introduction perfect
• clear voice-over 

Weaknesses:

• very short 
• needs interviews 
• re- film girls focus group quality is poor
• longer title 

how appealing is the documentary to the target audience 

'it is aapealing for teenagers becuase teenagers do buy lots of clothes therefore, your documentary will bring a change' 

'very because everyone (teenager) enjoy shopping +fashion, very interesting topic' 

' very appealing'

How professional is the quality of editing/titles/filming:

'good expect for girls scene'

'at the begging good use of cutaways and music choice 

'quite professional but need improvements'

does this look like a documentary that would be broadcast to the target audience  

'yes' 

'yes but the ending needs more improvements'

'yes because it becoming more professional over time but needs improvements'

How would you suggest they improve their work?

'add more cutaways and interview relevant to the topic'

're-shoot focus group as quality is very poor, also add more cutaways and interview to keep the audience interested.

Call Sheet

Shooting Day no: 3 Call time: Day/Date 26/01/2012

Producer: Mohyuddin Ahmad Director: Mohyuddin Ahmad

Prepared: YES

Scene	Location	Cast	Pages
Cutaways	Café Nero (Balham)	Camera man
		Director
		Producer

Cast	Character	Actor	Hair/Make-up	Set	Remarks
Jane Wangombe				Focus group (friends meet up)	Refer to shot list
Khannah Bint Salim				// //	// //
Dominique James				// //	// //
Marjan Latifi				// //	// //

Bits and extras	Report to:
Must get a variety of shots from different angles	Mohyuddin Ahmad
	Mohyuddin Ahmad
	Mohyuddin Ahmad

Special Instructions- Equipment- Remarks:

When filming the each shot should be done in order. I must ensure that the shots are completed in 2 hours as the girls will have to leave.

The equipment I will need for this shoot: tripod, camera, SD card and microphone.

Advanced schedule

Cover set:

Call Sheet

Shooting Day no: 2 Call time: Day/Date 08/01/2012

Producer: Mohyuddin Ahmad Director: Mohyuddin Ahmad

Prepared: YES

Scene	Location	Cast	Pages
1st secence documentary - Cutaways of shop signs and model looking through clothes	Southside shopping centre	Jane Wangombe – Actor
		Mohyuddin Ahmad – Camera/ director

Cast	Character	Actor	Hair/Make-up	Set	Remarks
Jane Wangombe	Model		Hair and make to be presentable and simple	TKMAX

Bits and extras	Report to:
When filming in the shopping centre need to be cautious of people as they might feel intimidated	Mohyuddin Ahmad

Special Instructions- Equipment- Remarks:

The location is in Wandsworth and so I will be using public transport (bus/underground to get there)

The shopping centre opens at 9am. I will ensure that I am there prompt at 9 so that its not so busy and the shots can be done with ease.

Advanced schedule

Cover set:

Call Sheet

Shooting Day no: 1 Call time: 6:30 Day/Date 06/12/11

Producer: Mohyuddin Ahmad Director: Mohyuddin Ahmad

Prepared: YES * Interview questions and practise shots have been prepared in advance

Scene	Location	Cast	Pages
Interview	Global Action Plan (Covent Garden)	Camera man
		Director
		Producer
		Interviewer
Cutaways		Camera man

Cast	Character	Actor	Hair/Make-up	Set	Remarks
	Interviewer	Mohyuddin Ahmad	Ensure that I look presentable on camera	Office/room	When filming be totally engaged with conversion and when asking questions be assertive and respectable

Bits and extras	Report to:
When filming the Cutaways it will be crucial to make sure that there are no others in shot without permission.	Mohyuddin Ahmad
Cutaways must be done when most convenient for the organizers	Mohyuddin Ahmad
All equipment must be out of harms way and be used when necessary.	Mohyuddin Ahmad

Special Instructions- Equipment- Remarks:

When filming the lighting and mise en scene should be at a good quality. In order for this to be achievable we will need to ensure that we are a the location ready and set-up before the interview time. This will also enables to not waste time and get good quality shots.

I will be getting the the locations via public transport and this could also delay time it is important to make sure that I give enough time for travel.

The equipment I will need for this shoot: tripod, dolly camera, SD card and microphone.

Advanced schedule

Cover set:

Production Schedule