final Audience feedback

Target Audience: ‘ although the voice over is of a male is  still clear to  see that the topic and overall documentary is intended  for females’ ‘the content and music both linked to females and teenagers’ ‘Girls are interested in shopping. Effective use of cutaways showing girls shopping, current  music relevant to girls, ‘young girls love to shop and by inclusion of TV programme Made and Chelsea the documentary appeals more to the target audience’   Weakness ‘a more creative title would have been more appealing’ ‘A few jump cuts need to be removed’

Technical quality and finish ‘the documentary is very near look professional however you need to fix sound + picture quality and edit the ending’ ‘I like the documentary it looks interesting and appealing. A good use of voice over gives the documentary a higher quality. ‘good footage and pace’ ‘overall very good quality’ Weaknesses ‘sound has let you down because in some places it is mixed up, focus group background sound is very loud’ ‘jump cuts during interview, missing footage, interesting title’ ‘there is not enough footage, you need to add the credit’s at the end’

Creativity ‘This documentary is creative as it has nice background music and is int time with the cutaways also some archive footage which makes it looks more interesting’ ‘Voice over was enthusiastic, and content was exiting’ ‘the use of different archive footage is creative and appealing, the introduction title when interviewee was introduced look good as it was pink as related to the target audience’ ‘Currently I haven’t seen anything like this on TV, os I think there this is creative and different. Good use of cutaways at introduction and through’ Weakness ‘you need to reference where music is from for legal purposes’ ‘don’t include different section V/O ‘make the interview shorter by adding more cutaways’ ‘nees more cutaway shots, you could add magazines, vox-pops’

Style and conventions of factual programming/ compare to real texts: ‘ I could definitely see this on television’ ‘many conventions have been used archive footage, cutaways, voice overs, expert opinions, titles, overall a very strong use of conventions’ ‘V/O, interview, Archie footage, overall good’ you have used cutaways that are of relevant, the voice over is clear’ Weakness There is not enough cutaway footage during the interview and add the end’ ‘No clear ending’ ‘need to add more such as vox-pop’ ‘