strengths
- Cutaways
- good use of music
- structure
- pace
- introduction perfect
- clear voice-over
Weaknesses:
- very short
- needs interviews
- re- film girls focus group quality is poor
- longer title
how appealing is the documentary to the target audience
'it is aapealing for teenagers becuase teenagers do buy lots of clothes therefore, your documentary will bring a change'
'very because everyone (teenager) enjoy shopping +fashion, very interesting topic'
' very appealing'
How professional is the quality of editing/titles/filming:
'good expect for girls scene'
'at the begging good use of cutaways and music choice
'quite professional but need improvements'
does this look like a documentary that would be broadcast to the target audience
'yes'
'yes but the ending needs more improvements'
'yes because it becoming more professional over time but needs improvements'
How would you suggest they improve their work?
'add more cutaways and interview relevant to the topic'
're-shoot focus group as quality is very poor, also add more cutaways and interview to keep the audience interested.
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